Super Messy Head Spaghetti


Even an experienced copywriter (me) knocks out a sub-par sales page sometimes, Reader

Last week I launched a new 1-1 service - The 90-day Marketing Action Plan.

During our 1-1 session, my first client mentioned they were worried we wouldn’t make progress because they were presenting me with a tangled lump of Head Spaghetti (they used the phrase Head Spaghetti and I loved it so much I’ve borrowed it for this email).

I reassured them that Head Spaghetti was one of my most favorite materials to work with.

A few hours later, someone else bought a MAP Session, and left a comment when booking saying they weren’t sure if they were ready for this because their thoughts were such a tangled mess.

And that’s when I realized my sales page wasn’t good enough yet.

If two people had bought the sessions even though they were worried about their Super Messy Head Spaghetti, imagine how many people who felt the exact same way had looked at the sales page and clicked away without buying 🫢🤯😲😱

So that I can pick up conversion-blockers ASAP, I try to make it as easy as possible for people to tell me what’s stopping them from buying, or what almost stopped them from buying.

Ways I do that:

  • Chat box on the sales page - I use Chatra (affiliate link)
  • Add an extra Question to the FAQs that says ‘I have a question not answered here’ - and tell them how to get in touch
  • I use the question ‘is there anything else you’d like to ask or tell me’ as an extra optional field just about any time someone is filling out a form - to book a call, give feedback, sending me a help request.
  • When getting feedback from paying clients ask ‘was there anything that nearly held you back from buying/booking this’

What might be secretly holding people back from buying your thing?

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